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Terry Li

I spent a session this weekend compressing notes I had filed earlier the same session. The originals ran around seventy lines each, with H2 sections, bullet lists, code blocks for regex examples, and bold paragraph anchors marking why-and-how-to-apply. The compressed versions ran around twenty lines each, with no headers, no bullets, no bold labels, and eventually no parenthetical brackets. What surprised me was that compression did not simply shorten the notes. It sharpened them.

The reason became visible only after the fact. Bullets let me drop a half-formed thought as a list item, and the visual structure implies a connection that the prose would have to make explicit. Headers do the same at section scale — a label like “Why” or “Worked example” lets a paragraph signal its role through a four-character cue rather than through a topic sentence that earns the same orientation through content. Bold paragraph anchors look more honest than bullets but carry the same defect at smaller scale. Parenthetical brackets are the smallest version, and the most insidious, because they let me drop a clarification or a list without committing to integrate it into the sentence. Each of these structural cues lets the writer skip work the prose should be doing.

Pure prose strips every affordance. Every sentence has to connect to the previous one. Every “because” has to actually hold. Two contradictory claims cannot sit in adjacent positions hoping nobody notices, because in continuous prose the contradiction surfaces as a syntactic problem rather than an aesthetic one. A paragraph whose first sentence does not signal whether it carries a reason or an instruction is a paragraph that has not been written.

This is not a stylistic preference. It is a thinking discipline. The format constraint forces the thinking quality. It is why board papers are pure prose, why senior consulting comms reject the bullet deck for the running argument, and why the strongest writing in any field tends to be the writing that resists structural shortcuts. Bullets are the format of someone explaining. Prose is the format of someone reasoning.

The implication for personal notes is direct. If a note files as a list of points, ask whether the points are genuinely parallel or whether the structure hides connective tissue that has not been thought through. If a note files as a three-section template, ask whether the template needs filling because the rule is rich, or whether the template is filling because the rule is thin and structure is doing the work the prose should do. The cost of dropping the scaffolding is real. It demands harder writing. The benefit is that the harder writing produces sharper rules, because the format will not let weak ones survive.

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